WhyStrohm launch film

Round 1

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  shot_01ACCEPT

  At full size a few glyphs in the cliff field read as 2 or 3 rather than 0 or 1. They are the size of grain and do not read as numbers at viewing size.

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  shot_02REVISE

  The view beyond the glass is a bright grey daytime sky and a sunlit coast. The environment anchor asks for a near-black night scene, and the window reads as the brightest thing in the frame.

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  shot_03REVISE

  Pages do not turn into digits. The two left columns are blank and the two right columns are fully printed, with a hard switch between them. Every printed page is an even block of black type on white, so density never carries shading and the halftone look is missing. The frame reads as printed code sheets.

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  shot_04ACCEPT

  The bright horizon line runs through the left third at mid height, under where text_04 sits.

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  shot_05ACCEPT

  A tiny dark object sits on the horizon at about x 525, inside the left third where whystrohm.com lands.

Round 2

Why this round ran: shot_02 came back REVISE on a daytime view and digits printed on the glass; shot_03 came back REVISE on pages that switch from blank to full print with no halftone shading.

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  shot_02REVISE

  The fix did not take. The view is still a daytime coast: bright grey sky, sunlit sea and a lit beach. 'black night coast' in the subject was not enough against the window.

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  shot_03ACCEPT

  At full size the middle strips carry smudged, half-formed glyphs, some reading as 2, 5 or 7. At viewing size they read as the scatter stage between blank and dense.

Round 3

Why this round ran: shot_02 came back REVISE again in round 2: the view was still daytime and the digits still sat on the glass.

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  shot_02ACCEPT

  At full size many glyphs are 2, 6, 7 or 8 rather than 0 or 1. At viewing size they are grain-sized and read as texture, not numbers.